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I'm coming to get you
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 06:49:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm coming to get you
I'm coming to get you
She sang
To herself
Locked in a cold
Dark room
Nowhere to hide
From the shadows
Noone to
Keep her company
Except her song
I'm coming to get you
I'm coming to get you
She sang quietly
Menace in her eye
She had been teased
Beaten, hurt
Isolated
For 13 years now
For 13 years now
Her insanity
Has been spreading
Through her
Like a cancer
Gripping her body
And tearing her apart
No comfort
Except her song
I'm coming to get you
I'm coming to get you
Her heart has been rung
Dry
Her soul has been torn
Apart
Her mind has been tortured
And taunted
Her own family
Rejected her
Made her life
A living hell
Locked her up
Everyday
In a dark
Cold
Room
Now it was time
For her revenge...
I'm coming to get you
I'm coming to get you
Copyright ©
Kitty_cat
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2004-12-30 06:49:54]
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Re: I'm coming to get you
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by srugglingyoungster on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:03:37 AM AEST
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| nice! ...keep it up! |
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Re: I'm coming to get you
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:43:06 AM AEST
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very dark and chilling, a great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: I'm coming to get you
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 11:38:06 AM AEST
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hey i liked it a lot it was very good please comment on mine ok bye
DEMON |
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Re: I'm coming to get you
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:05:58 PM AEST
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this is good it had a good chill to it lol but there is one part i may sugest changing
Her mind has been tortured
And taunted
Her own family
Rejected her
Made her life
A living hell
Locked her up
Everyday
In a dark
Cold
Room
i would change room to cell it will help the flow alot but thats just what i think happy writeing
SM |
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Re: I'm coming to get you
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:22:32 PM AEST
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| one of the best ive read lately, i loved it its a poem that wont get boring no matter how many times you read it keep them coming |
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