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Deaths cold dead hand
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:37:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As i lay in my death bed
My final moments before me
I stare into deaths cold face
I want to ask him to hurry
To ask him for this final mercy
I welcome death
To free myself from lifes corruptions
Now i can see death,
I can see his horible face
I am happy to leave this life
Death now reaches out his hand
In a cold voice, i hear him
"Come with me, it is your time."
I cant refuse
And as i reach out, i can feel
All my sadness wash away
As i feel his cold dead skin
My dread dissappears
And as i leave my corpse behind
A smile appears on my face
I walk into the unknown
Death by my side
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2004-12-30 01:37:07]
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Re: Deaths cold dead hand
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:42:54 AM AEST
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| very dark, very good |
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Re: Deaths cold dead hand
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:54:51 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Deaths cold dead hand
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:35:51 AM AEST
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A very dark sad write, nicely composed too.
Keep writing
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Deaths cold dead hand
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:26:04 AM AEST
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| Dark and great,I liked this alot. |
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Re: Deaths cold dead hand
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:37:13 AM AEST
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| A very good write. |
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Re: Deaths cold dead hand
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:43:42 AM AEST
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dark and emotional, good write
pixie xx |
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Re: Deaths cold dead hand
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:21:25 PM AEST
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what is this that stands before me?
Figure in black which points at me...
Dark stuff, man.
--ghosty |
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