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Move on
Contributed by
thegurl
on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Just had to die didn't you
It's not fair
Our time wasn't over
He stole it from us
There's nothing I can do
So now what
What am I supposed to do
Who do I love
How do I know
If you don't show me
You and I
Were supposed to grow old
Yet here I am
Still stuck in the past
Still in love with you
Alone in love
Make me let you go
So I can love again.
Copyright ©
thegurl
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2004-12-30 00:28:27]
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Re: Move on
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:10:37 AM AEST
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| good write im still stuck n the past everything bugs me n brings me down i hope this new gal i love helps me move on |
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Re: Move on
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:46:54 AM AEST
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| sad, good poem |
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Re: Move on
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:36:12 AM AEST
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Oh this is just sad, it will take time to move on but i hope you the best. This is a good poem showing true inner feelings. Well done.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Move on
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by musicisluv7 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:46:53 AM AEST
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it takes time to let go and move on. it took a few years for me.. but it gts easier day by day and memories never go away. gr8 write!!
much luv
me xx |
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Re: Move on
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by Kitty_cat on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:10:20 AM AEST
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It kinda brought a bit of your childish side out, which I liked. Tragic poem. keep it up
cat xx |
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