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''BE SURE TO LEAVE YOU''
Contributed by
thelmaandlouise72
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:49:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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MY HEARTS DESIRE, MY WORLD'S ON FIRE
MY BODY'S ACHING, MY SOUL IS BREAKING
SO MANY EMOTIONS RUN THROUGH MY MIND,
MY LIFE IS READY TO REWIND
I LET YOU RUINE ALL I HAD,
NOW I SIT HERE FEELING SAD
YOU HAVE NO CONSCIENCE, YOU HAVE NO SORROW,
I'LL BE SURE TO LEAVE YOU COME TOMORROW
Copyright ©
thelmaandlouise72
... [
2004-12-29 23:49:19]
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Re: ''BE SURE TO LEAVE YOU''
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:42:39 AM AEST
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| HERE, HERE! we need more people like that, because they just stick around for the abuse, pain, and hurt because of love. brilliant write. short and to the point. very powerful. |
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Re: ''BE SURE TO LEAVE YOU''
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:52:58 AM AEST
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| very powerfully good poem |
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Re: ''BE SURE TO LEAVE YOU''
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:53:01 AM AEST
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Very nice poem, very easy to read and it has an awesome flow.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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