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Untitled
Contributed by
__happyhurt__
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:46:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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All these feelings, bottled up inside
Start to leak out trough a crack
Just a trickle
Then the whole bottle breaks
Leaving me bloody and torn inside
Raw and bleeding, my scars are ripped fresh
I hurt, I cry, I sigh
I die inside
Sorry for all that had to have happened
Needing, Longing for a second chance
To start anew, make all these scars cease to exist
To push these feelings back into non-existence
Fix this bady beaten heart of mine
Put together the pieces of yours
A smile and a kiss to make it right again
Copyright ©
__happyhurt__
... [
2004-12-29 23:46:10]
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Re: Untitled
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by thelmaandlouise72 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:51:21 PM AEST
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| SOUNDS LIKE A TOREN SOUL, I HAVE FELT THAT WAY AS WELL |
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Re: Untitled
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:57:31 AM AEST
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| i have felt that way too |
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Re: Untitled
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:53:11 AM AEST
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Nicely done, written very well. Could have used a rythem to it but the message is brilliant.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Untitled
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by Kitty_cat on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:58:13 AM AEST
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| I liked this a lot. Well done |
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Re: Untitled
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:05:50 PM AEST
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| I liked the thought..bottled up and slowly leaking out till the final rupture..very good. |
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