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''YOUR DEATH''
Contributed by
thelmaandlouise72
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:27:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I MISS YOU MORE THAN YOU WILL KNOW,
I LOVE YOU MORE THAN I WILL SHOW
MY HEART IS BREAKING WITHOUT YOU HERE,
IF ONLY YOU WERE ALIVE AND NEAR
YOUR DEATH WILL ALWAYS HAUNT MY MIND,
BUT I WILL LOVE YOU FOR ALL OF TIME
Copyright ©
thelmaandlouise72
... [
2004-12-29 23:27:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ''YOUR DEATH''
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:31:25 PM AEST (User
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awww i am soo sorry for your loss...but this is a beautiful poem and it is really touching. im sure he is looking down and smiling upon u....thanks for sharing |
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Re: ''YOUR DEATH''
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:32:28 PM AEST (User
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powerful and emotional write. short and to the point. love transcends death. |
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Re: ''YOUR DEATH''
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:46:23 PM AEST (User
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Very sad but written well. I too am so sorry for your loss.
Only the body dies, the spirit-n-soul will always be with u.
Awesome writing.
huggs, smiles, luv,
emy |
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Re: ''YOUR DEATH''
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:01:23 AM AEST (User
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so sad, im sorry for your loss, great poetry |
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