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''CAN ANYONE HEAR?''
Contributed by
thelmaandlouise72
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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WHAT DO YOU SAY WHEN YOUR FALLING APART,
DOES ANYONE UNDERSTAND YOU HAVE A HEART?
LIFE IS FULL OF MISERY AND PAIN,
YOUR SOUL IS ACHING WITH HOPELESS STAINS
SCARES TEAR AT YOUR MIND AND FILL YOU WITH SHAME,
TILL YOU FEEL YOUR GOING COMPLETELY INSANE
DEPRESSION SETS IN AND YOUR CONSUMED BY DOUBT,
YOUR ONLY CHOICE IS TO STAND UP AND SHOUT
CAN ANYONE HEAR YOUR CRY FOR HELP?
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2004-12-29 23:16:05]
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Re: ''CAN ANYONE HEAR?''
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:19:03 PM AEST
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| many can hear it, but they dont care to listen...amazing poem. |
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Re: ''CAN ANYONE HEAR?''
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:20:13 PM AEST
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| amazing..absoulutely amazing. i can feel the despair and many times i have felt these feelings. u r not alone....i love this...i can see myself in this poem lol....did u write it about me.? hehe. well done, its a great write and so powerful. try and keep hope. |
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Re: ''CAN ANYONE HEAR?''
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:41:33 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
Luv your pen name -n-luv the movie.
I can certainly relate but now meds make my days-n-nites brighter.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ''CAN ANYONE HEAR?''
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:02:35 AM AEST
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| very good poetry, but very sad |
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Re: ''CAN ANYONE HEAR?''
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by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 09:17:57 AM AEST
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| Good job. My fave line was "YOUR SOUL IS ACHING WITH HOPELESS STAINS". |
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