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Beyond the Grave
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The end is near as i see the gallows,
The hatred builds as i draw nearer
The hatred for this town, for god
Why did they have to take her away?
She was so beautiful, this witch i loved
I swore revenge on the town
When they took her away from me
The minister died by my hand
And as they lead me to the gallows
To kill in the name of god
I shout curses at them, wishing them death
Now i have reached the gallows
As they fit the rope around my neck
My anger and hate rage out of control
I swear revenge from beyond my grave,
As my neck snaps and death comes
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2004-12-29 22:40:00]
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Re: Beyond the Grave
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:49:14 PM AEST
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| wow, this is awesome....very dark and ive never read a poem like this on this subject. well done, great |
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Re: Beyond the Grave
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:49:57 PM AEST
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| reminded me of the witch of blackbird pond and the crucible. excellent write. people say hanging is cruel and unusual punishment but its actually one of the more human because the person suffocates while they are unconcious. |
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Re: Beyond the Grave
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by silverjade on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:58:31 PM AEST
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very interesting, very dark, excellent work
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Re: Beyond the Grave
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by pyro_88 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:22:05 AM AEST
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| i love it. keep em coming. |
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Re: Beyond the Grave
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 02:05:16 AM AEST
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| very interesting, very dark, i like it |
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Re: Beyond the Grave
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by Kitty_cat on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 07:20:32 AM AEST
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| interesting topic |
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Re: Beyond the Grave
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:06:13 AM AEST
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| I love dark poetry,and this is one i enjoyed |
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