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mY rOLLeRcOaStEr
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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life is a rollercoaster
and i cant get off
cant get away
the ups and downs
of this wild ride
seems too much to bear
im tired
cant catch my breath
cant find peace
im rolling further
down this hill
of despair
with nothing to live for
nothing to see
up ahead
alone and sad
this rollercoaster
is rolling too fast
dont think i can take
this pain anymore
i want to just jump
and never look back
be rid of the endless
falling
and swift movements
of nothing through life
i think im gonna jump...
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pUnKa_RaCh
... [
2004-12-29 22:36:56]
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Re: mY rOLLeRcOaStEr
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:52:19 PM AEST
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| taking the approach of having more less severe downs and ups, just to have the worst downer of all? if you jump, youre farther away from going up, which many think happiness is up that way. |
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Re: mY rOLLeRcOaStEr
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:58:33 AM AEST
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| It's a good poem, but don't jump. |
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Re: mY rOLLeRcOaStEr
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by Riot_Girl on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 12:20:40 PM AEST
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Great poem.. i like it alot, mainly tho, i have a poem called my rollercoaster also and its just like yours but longer, i'll post it next so u can see, Keep up the writing tho! Latea
-Riot Girl
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