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WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
Contributed by
Rhymingron
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:01:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What if there was a war and no one came?
What would the commentators talk about?
And those vendors who profit from the game
Whatever would they do when they're shut out?
What of the perpatrators of the thing?
Who from their ivory towers keep the score
Control subjects like puppets on a string.
What if they never could do war no more?
Or maybe they could have themselves a duel
These fearless leaders never had to fight
I hope no one will think I'm being cruel
When I confess I might enjoy the sight.
No winners, losers, bearer of the blame
If there should be a war and no one came.
Copyright ©
Rhymingron
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2004-12-29 22:01:17]
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:15:51 PM AEST
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awesom write,keep it up!!
cheech |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by Jakenstein on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:16:17 PM AEST
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| Let me start off by saying thank you for your comment.....and as you can tell by the poem of mine you read....war is pointless....i like your poem alot....not very many people think about what would happen if no one decided to fight in a war....very good write...looking forward to seeing more |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:57:34 PM AEST
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| excellent sonnet =] i loved the perspective. very original. |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:00:23 PM AEST
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| wow, this is a very thought provoking poem...well done.. i love ur word usage |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:12:34 AM AEST
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| good point |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:13:47 PM AEST
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I like your style and your words. You write about the world and that's important. Great work.
J~ |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:32:12 PM AEST
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excellent poem and super vision, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:37:54 PM AEST
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Awesome write!!
I love the couplet at the end. So true. |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:38:11 PM AEST
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| Creative and expressive, a pleasure to read. |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:43:38 PM AEST
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| This is a very good write..I like your views expressed here. |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by OnAngelswings on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:06:40 PM AEST
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| This is very well done as well...you have a good way with expressing yourself...Very nice....I'll bet not many think about who they send to war...Shari |
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Re: WAR NO MORE-A SONNET
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by Phantomdream on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 07:17:25 PM AEST
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WEll, I read it, and, I absolutely love it.
-Phantomdream |
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