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Contributed by
bre
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:39:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The guy you thought was great the only one for you,
you made a mistake to take his hand well now you see he is not a great man.
but since then i take my hand and cut in to my soul becouse the tole he took on us
is now geting out of control but now the cutting is takeing control.
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bre
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2004-12-29 21:39:25]
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Re: control
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:55:30 PM AEST
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so littel words can decribe the most pain,i really enjoyed reading this and if u reallly need help mail me and i'd be more the happy to help ya out,awesome write,keep up the terrific job!!
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Re: control
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:59:55 PM AEST
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| short and to the point. powerful. |
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Re: control
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:10:45 PM AEST
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| oh my gosh, this was beautiful and i can totally understand where ur coming from....i hope u r alrite and i can totally relate to what a guy can make u do. u r not alone. try and keep hope, someone will come along that will treat u better. amazing poem |
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