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Betrayal and Revenge
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:43:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As i watch the blood leave my body
I have no hope left, for my life
Somehow i am relieved, happy even
Though I can feel the intense dread,
As if its suffocating my soul,
I feel no more guilt, we are even now
And as i see the knife wounds
And the blood pouring out of them
I start to remember
When i was happy,
All the women i have loved,
You left me here to die
In the dark night,
You had your revenge
As your knife punctured my skin
I remember the freindship we once had
The night i betrayed you
The night you swore revenge on me
The memories are more painful
Then my wounds, inflicted by you
But now we are even
There will be no revenge
I am happy as i meet satan
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Re: Betrayal and Revenge
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:08:23 PM AEST
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| powerful and captivating poem. |
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Re: Betrayal and Revenge
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by ShadowsLuster on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:10:27 PM AEST
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Powerful. You paint a clear picture. Very powerful I must say again. Keep that up!
As for the wrist slashings (if that's what you're doing) dont do it. Physical pain can never where away the emotional pain. The releif is just a mind set and then that pain you say you still feel is the emotional pain you tryed to erase. Dont do it again, it's not good for you!! And you'll always find another love. ^_^ |
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Re: Betrayal and Revenge
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:12:31 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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Re: Betrayal and Revenge
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by pyro_88 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:26:32 AM AEST
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| i love it. another great write. keep em coming. |
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