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Writings of a desperate girl
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm the one that causes all my problems,
I'm the one that wastes everyone's time.
I don't deserve anything,
Only one thing.
I'm the one that needs to be punished,
I'm the one hurting everyone.
I'm the one ruining people's lives.
I don't deserve love,
I don't deserve life.
I'm the one that needs to die,
I'm sorry...
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2004-12-29 20:42:20]
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Re: Writings of a desperate girl
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by ShadowsLuster on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:06:43 PM AEST
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That write has a lot of feeling in it. I can see where you're going. Good job! ^_^
If this reflects your personal life, if you dont mind I'll give you my advice: Always be happy, keep a smile on your face. Dont let anyone get you down. And everyone deserves love. It's just that people try to look for it, and that's when they get dissapointed and fail. Let it come up and nip you in the butt. It will, someday it will. |
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Re: Writings of a desperate girl
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:10:34 PM AEST
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| i dont think anyone deserves anything. its consequence not coincidence. are the things you tell yourself true? |
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Re: Writings of a desperate girl
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:57:20 AM AEST
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| awesome!! well done |
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Re: Writings of a desperate girl
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:34:22 AM AEST
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| This is really a good poem. If, however, it reflects your life, you need to look around you. There is always someone worse off affording many opportunities to be useful. |
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Re: Writings of a desperate girl
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by True-to-the-Heart on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:42:35 AM AEST
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| so blunt.. need anything let me know xXx |
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