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Confusions of the Teenage Lover (122904)
Contributed by
ShadowsLuster
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sudden Temptations,
Infect our realm.
Values to be kept,
Our strong will we keep from infect.
Ensnared by the look of her eyes,
Cause me to submit with no surprise.
Utterly hypnotized,
Hands make their way down to her thighs.
We share that stare,
Of 'Let's get closer.'
Passion surmounts,
Internal shouts,
And we pull away in surprise.
'Is that me?'
We share the thought.
'Can it be?'
A thought not easily bought.
Cuddled in her arms,
I pondered of what I have done.
A gaze into her eyes,
And my doubts resulted to none.
More kisses we made that night,
Slipped into a world of utter delight.
Confusion would soon surmount home in my bed.
Until then we kissed in its stead.
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ShadowsLuster
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2004-12-29 20:27:19]
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Re: Confusions of the Teenage Lover (122904)
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:37:53 PM AEST
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Lots of emotion in this...you're on the right track my friend.
Keep writing
Larry |
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Re: Confusions of the Teenage Lover (122904)
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:23:42 PM AEST
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| powerful poem. i agree with larry. |
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