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I need help
Contributed by
jillian_f006
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:03:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I don’t know how to say what I want
I sit here writing this
Pouring my heart out
My red tears drop to the paper
The pain I feel inside is just unreal
Sometimes I think I can really feel it
It hurt to the point I want to die
It’s not a first time for that feeling
I need help
I need serious help
But I don’t know how to get it
I’m on the right track
But yet I'm so far away
I hate everything
I’m living in a surreal world
Nothing is going on around me
I don’t have a clue of the past week
I need to get everything out
But it’s hard
Am I a wuss
Or what’s going on
Give me some direction
And give me some support
I am too close to giving up
I’m hanging on by a thin line
Copyright ©
jillian_f006
... [
2004-12-29 20:03:53]
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Re: I need help
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by killingmehslowly on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:08:53 PM AEST
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| I know how it feels to hurt like that. I fend off feelings like that almost everyday. I wish i had some brilliant, insightfull help to offer...but i'm afraid i don't. Writing is a great way to express your feelings...that might help. Or try talking to a close someone(s), that can also help. Again i'm sorry i can't really offer anything. But I can tell you I like your poem alot. If you ever need to talk to me, i'm here. PM me sometime. -Sami- |
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Re: I need help
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by diamond_tears on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:45:17 PM AEST
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pm me- i no some of what your feeling. ill try and help. love jo xxx
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Re: I need help
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:29:09 PM AEST
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| i would like it if you read my poem, What Could Be, because it relates to this perfectly. the only direction you need in life is forward. =] |
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