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I love you
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Scared, of all that there is to learn.
Afraid of what there is to lose.
Confused about all there is to choose.
Why is this so hard to do?
Loving everyday with you.
Dreming of those kiss's
Missing all there is about you
I just dont see why I can't say I love you.
Thinking of every single move
Remembering every time you knew
Feeling all there is to feel
Here it is I love you
Copyright ©
Naughtygurl
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2004-12-29 19:13:14]
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Re: I love you
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:16:41 PM AEST
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I like it. I especially like the closing stanza. keep it up.
cat xx |
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Re: I love you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:17:11 PM AEST
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Aww...very sweet and heartfelt write.
Nice work. |
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Re: I love you
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:57:04 PM AEST
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| let him or who eva know find out if they feel the same great write |
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Re: I love you
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by killingmehslowly on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:59:04 PM AEST
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| good write. i like it. |
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Re: I love you
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by Unspoken_Love on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:05:35 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem, I love the ending.. Good luck with your crush! |
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Re: I love you
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:14:14 PM AEST
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saying i love you for the first time to someone, can truely be rough, atleast it was for me. i love it, u really do a great job closing out a poem
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