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The Good Times
Contributed by
punkhead13
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:33:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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13 going on 14 and we still have a life to live. Say your apologies, forget and forgive. These days are the good days and we can't let them slip by. We aren't goona waste them doing drugs and getting high. Our laughs we have get us through the day.Pritty soon we will be geting out of high school and on our way.Some day we will look back on to day and wounder why, wounder why we acted so retardedly funny and how the heck we are still alive. We do stupid stunts that could take away our tomarow and end our lives in sorrow.we know we act stupid but it's the only thing that gets us by. We want to laugh before we die, not cry.
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Re: The Good Times
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:07:52 PM AEST
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| since this seems to be a rhyming poem, you need to format it to verses and not write it like an essay. needs some work on grammar also. im 15 going on 30 as they say. and most of the people in my school just waste the future away.... |
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Re: The Good Times
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 07:25:38 AM AEST
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That sums everything up nicely...It's nice to see someone wanting to live their lives as you describe. Good for you... This is a lovely write , I hope to read more in the future.
take care, live well. |
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