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The halls and through the glass
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:48:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The halls await
the walls die silent
I walk between the rich of life
empty handed
Grey eyes swollen black
my eyes enchanted
i bare the rain
you wont look at
I can feel the light
stabbed by the darkness
dying in between the cracks
I follow you
my love
my honest
hoping that u will look back
a gift divine
a soul shed promise
may the ice
not melt.....
but crack
I will wait
hanging from the moon
back burnt by the sun
am i the only one
at the gates
turning to look back
watch their eyes die slowly
as the pass
cant see through the glass......
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feathercut
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2004-12-29 16:48:43]
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Re: The halls and through the glass
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:50:18 PM AEST
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| Wow...powerful write. |
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Re: The halls and through the glass
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:38:34 PM AEST
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| i agree with marisa. amazing poem. i loved it. |
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Re: The halls and through the glass
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by Vermilion on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:42:51 AM AEST
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This poem seriously made me want to cry. And hug you. It's great, though - beautifully written. Good job.
/Mili |
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