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giving
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:41:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When giving is nothing
but bleeding in vein
when ignorance ends
in blyss or in pain
ive given my heart
ive taken nothing
you ask me not more
than games of the sane
when talking men crawl and moan
in the stables
the silent men seem
to be more able
when talking men crawl
and moan in the stables
the silent men seem to be more able
IM BURSTING OUT
IM TERRIFIED
i am of the talking machines
blood running dry
tears always
and never
free
When loving is never
When keeping the lines
When keeping forever
When dying inside
I beg
you say nothing
I beg you to stay
When giving is nothing
but bleeding in vein
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2004-12-29 16:41:34]
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Re: giving
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:43:08 PM AEST
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powerful poem.
great job |
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Re: giving
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:47:09 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I like it.
"When loving is never
When keeping the lines
When keeping forever
When dying inside"
Powerful |
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Re: giving
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:00:47 PM AEST
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| good write. but one mistake is that it should be vain and not vein. |
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