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'' Life or Death''
Contributed by
ravensfire
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:38:15 PM in AEST
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Is it wrong to not want to live?, When you gave all that you can give! When the struggle of life is at an end, The rules of man you cannot bend. Is it wrong to have not an ounce of hope?, When you drown your sorrows in an ounce of dope! Don't tell me I will suceed when I just want to survive, Is it wrong to feel not alive? Is it wrong to take this life of mine?, When I feel its not worth a dime. I do not wish to suffer no more, When they say " LIVE LIFE", I say " WHAT FOR" ! O.W.W.T.B.D.
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Re: '' Life or Death''
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:40:14 PM AEST
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| Great write. I've also felt like this before. |
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Re: '' Life or Death''
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:46:44 PM AEST
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| since this poem seems to be a rhyming one, you need to format this into verses and not just format it like an essay. you had very nice rhymes. excellent write. |
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Re: '' Life or Death''
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by DamentedSuicide on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:06:44 PM AEST
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sounds familliar, i mean ive been where you were at I loved the rite it was very good
~~~Raven~~~
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Re: '' Life or Death''
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by Solnubis on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 12:58:22 PM AEST
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| Wow! deep and can so relate to that feeling of stuggling to live but wanting to die. Deep! I agree it should be versed not written as an essay. It has very descprictive wording and you can actually feel the feeling as you read it. Just one thing what is O.W.W.T.B.D.? |
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