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Some Words I Will Never Say
Contributed by
Dri
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:00:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There are some things I can’t tell you
There are some words I’ll never say
There are some names I can’t let past my lips
There are some secrets I’ll never reveal
Isn’t that the irony?
Oh, how it glimmers in my hand
Catching everyone’s eye
They are drawn to the possibility
Don’t say that word, don’t whisper that name
It kills me
My heart bawls up and condenses
Sinking to the pit of my stomach
That is the extent of my pain
So impossible
Everyone is flocking to the scene of the crime
Trying to find themselves in the wreckage
That’s what draws them to it, you know
They can see their reflections in my pools of blood
Oh, great race! Humans, one and many
Your narcissism never fails to make me laugh
There are some things I can’t tell even them
So don’t give me that look when I say I don’t want to talk about it
With your brows drawn together
I love you more than I can say, so I just can’t tell you about it
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Dri
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2004-12-29 14:00:01]
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Re: Some Words I Will Never Say
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by english-pea-pelter on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:38:11 PM AEST
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well done! i can definatly relate... ^_^ V
peace out
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Re: Some Words I Will Never Say
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:48:12 PM AEST
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| very very good poem, i would love to see more |
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Re: Some Words I Will Never Say
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:53:13 PM AEST
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loved the lines - "...flockinking to the scene of the crime
trying to find themselves in the wreckage"! great stuff, that.
as already stated, hope to see more
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Some Words I Will Never Say
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:36:30 PM AEST
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Awesome. And I'm with reprobate about those lines.
Great job, keep writing.
--Nora |
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Re: Some Words I Will Never Say
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:56:26 PM AEST
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| excellent write. =] |
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Re: Some Words I Will Never Say
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:48:33 PM AEST
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"My heart bawls up and condenses
Sinking to the pit of my stomach".Wonderful write |
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Re: Some Words I Will Never Say
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:52:00 PM AEST
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Brilliant write. Some of those descriptions were absolutely amazing. keep it up.
consider me a fan
cat xx |
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