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Losing What's Dearest
Contributed by
lucyspoetry
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:38:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Losing What's Dearest
More than You would ever know,
More than You'll ever understand.
How much I care for You,
How much I truely do love You so.
There's so much at stake here,
Not sure what should be done.
Rather hard when, You're about to
Lose what's Dearest to You now.
Written by *~*Lucy*~*
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lucyspoetry
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2004-12-29 13:38:07]
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Re: Losing What's Dearest
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:10:25 PM AEST
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| this seems kind of awkward. it doesnt seem to have any emotional or powerful feelings at all behind this. very short and to the point, but i think it would be better longer, and less vague. |
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Re: Losing What's Dearest
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:34:46 PM AEST
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I agree with Essentially9.
It does seem kind of awkward, but it has a lot of potential! |
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