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When You Dream
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:50:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When you dream,
If it never comes true do you stop dreaming,
and when your happy if you end up crying
do you stop being happy,
If you love , but end up losing,
do you stop loving...
After all These tears this hurt, these broken dreams,
I know It is so hard,
but I also know I will never stop dreaming,
or smiling,
or loving...
I could never stop loving...
because without love there is no life...
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Naughtygurl
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2004-12-29 11:50:31]
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Re: When You Dream
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:43:10 PM AEST
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i am a little bit more cynical than most, so i am sorry to say that there is only so much pain a person can take before they give up.
i love this poem, though, full of emotion, very good. keep writing! |
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Re: When You Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:41:24 PM AEST
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| Great write. There's a lot of emotion in it. |
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Re: When You Dream
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:46:21 AM AEST
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| powerful and emotional poem. i liked it =] |
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