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Away from you
Contributed by
loopylou
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:01:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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and the fairy tales
and the dragons
they all fly
under a pink moon
in a purple lit sky
i use to runaway from you
in never never land
somwhere you couldnt hurt me
it was my secret plan
the streets were made from marshmellow
so when u pushed me down
id bounce right back
when you turned your head
id turn the tracks
there's a sweet smell in the air
instead of your fire breathing smoke
nice things to taste
plenty of time to waste
as i wallow in the sun
i no longer have to run
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loopylou
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2004-12-29 11:01:46]
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Re: Away from you
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by LevyMetal on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:11:22 AM AEST
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| Intense. This poem brought me back to younger years. Thanks for sharing. =) |
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Re: Away from you
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:28:30 PM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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