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I dont think i can last
Contributed by
StrwBrryStrBrst0225
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:55:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No one knows what it's like
To feel like your not worth it.
And no one has ever felt this pain I feel
Sometimes it's hard to tell if this life i live is real.
Sometimes I close my eyes to make myself believe,
but when I open them theres no relief.
How, Why can't I make this seem right,
Each and every night i cry myself to sleep.
I guess this is it, I dont know why life is so confusing...
Maybe if i did i could tell you.
Do you know how life can get you so lost,
and whats the cost to get it back......
To live and be happy again,
can you tell me ,
because....
I don't think I can last.
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2004-12-29 10:55:58]
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Re: I dont think i can last
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by Evilcaf on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:09:47 AM AEST
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| I feel like this all the time at the moment, hoping it will get better for both of us. A good write and well written.... luv Caf xx |
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Re: I dont think i can last
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:54:33 AM AEST
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| excellent write. well since you seem to be a freestyler you could go for strict formatting poems such as haikus, sonnets, and any number of things. |
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