|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
me and the moon
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:44:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
and the tears fall freely from her face
as the stars outside her window aline
"was i just a use for your time?"
sanity is still here as it stares her in the mirror
the boundries are broken with her dreams
and she wishes she could fly
like the moon she feels she is half
and her pail reflection tells the story of both struggles
" i wanted and i wished for you"
but you left
and now its just me and the moon
Copyright ©
loopylou
... [
2004-12-29 10:44:32]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: me and the moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 10:45:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
there is something beautiful about the moon, a sad write,
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: me and the moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:58:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| powerful and emotional write. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
