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TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
Contributed by
Zack_Chamber
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:00:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT,
AS I LAY UPON MY BED,
THE SWEETEST MEMORIES THAT I HAVE OF YOU,
WANDERS ACROSS MY HEAD.
A HEART IS BLEEDING CRYING FOR LOVE,
ITS TEARS WILL BURN MY SOUL,
WEEPING FOR A LOVE THAT NEVER WAS,
BUT WENT BEYOND CONTROL.
THOUGH YOUR LOVE WILL NEVER BE MINE,
AND MY HEART WILL SURELY DIE,
THE JOY I FELT WHEN YOU WERE NEAR,
CAN NEVER BE DENIED.
TONIGHT THE MOON DOESN'T SEEM TO SMILE,
AND THE STARS DON'T SEEM AS BRIGHT,
THEY SEEM TO MOURN ALL FOR THE LOVE,
AND THE HEART THAT DIED TONIGHT.
Copyright ©
Zack_Chamber
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2004-12-29 07:00:22]
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:14:21 AM AEST
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awww that was so deep and moving, great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:31:10 AM AEST
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| i cant believe how few comments you've had considering the number of reads. I really liked this poem and I can really relate to the themes. I feel i connected with it. |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:44:20 AM AEST
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i'm with christopher - can't believe it. nice poem, especially like the last stanza.
keep posting! |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:41:47 AM AEST
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Bravo what a beautiful poem which is deserving of many more comments. I loved it it was brilliant great flow and fantastic words
LOVED IT
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by killingmehslowly on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:49:28 AM AEST
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| wow...it just flows. Wonderful poem. .. ... i don't know what else to say..just wow. I like this alot. great job. |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Zack_Chamber on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:43:47 PM AEST
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| This peotry is about tears when a man thinking his Whole past in in one day so his Eyes wet with tears and his drops of tears Wash his whole face.. |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Zack_Chamber on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:48:41 PM AEST
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| As parents is the soreces of our success they guide us how to speek how to do things and every thing abour social socity so we have to respect them give the love in there Old age Help them |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Zack_Chamber on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:48:42 PM AEST
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| As parents is the soreces of our success they guide us how to speek how to do things and every thing abour social socity so we have to respect them give the love in there Old age Help them |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Row on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:54:41 PM AEST
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| ah yeah, fair good |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Crimsonflame on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:10:23 PM AEST
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| it's so beautiful,im so touched by the beauty oof ur words.really emotional.i could feel the pain behind it..and the longing too.thank u for sharing. |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by fastpitchqt on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:11:52 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem...i can closely relate to it!! keep up the writing..you have a talent!! |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by Loyalist on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:40:02 AM AEST
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| This is your best yet. This was great! Very good emotions and feelings. Yours is, obviously, a deep love. Nothing moves more than love, except love lost. Thanks for reading my opinion. |
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Re: TEAR DROPS WASH MY FACE TONIGHT
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 11:21:35 AM AEST
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this was a great poem.. i liked it alot..
take care
christina |
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