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My Love
Contributed by
The_Callif
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Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:49:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Stars in the black sky above
My heart beats fondly from your love
I could spend hours or days or months with you
For love is strong and love is true
If I were to die right here and now
If something so horrible god would allow
I would die a happy man
For you in all your beauty and grace
Are lying here in my embrace
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Re: My Love
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by Crimsonflame on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:56:28 AM AEST
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| very beautiful........and i can feel ur feelings from each line.who ever the girl is,she's lucky.hope to see more of ur works!!!! |
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Re: My Love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:34:23 AM AEST
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Woo u have a masterpeice of luv in this write.
U write with so much passion.
smiles, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Love
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by girish on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:22:21 AM AEST
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verses brief and superb but why do you take to die god will protect your love. read my poems on "The Gift of your eye-sight" and other poems on love. you will praise your love more.
girish |
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Re: My Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:38:20 PM AEST
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| Aww This is an absolutely beautiful poem. Great job! |
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