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''addiction''
Contributed by
english-pea-pelter
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:49:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Addiction, constriction… It’s all in my head.
I know what you did. I know what you said.
Your words are like air. I know that you care.
The addiction to you, it’s like a clue.
I don’t know. I’m left all alone...
The pills are there. I know I shouldn’t. I don’t care.
I take them all the room goes black.
I’ve passed out, I’ll be back.
The pills, I lose my will.
I take it again I go astray.
And then again, on my back I lay.
I can’t stop. I will die.
You ignore this in minds eye.
I love you. I hate you. I’m gone.
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2004-12-29 01:49:51]
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Re: ''addiction''
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:52:48 AM AEST
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| good poem, kinda sad.... |
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Re: ''addiction''
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:58:28 AM AEST
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sad and well expressed, we all have our addictions
pixie xx |
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Re: ''addiction''
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by Miss_Erika on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:44:34 PM AEST
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I liked it. even though it was sad. ...brings back memorys. i looked at your other poems to but i like this one the most.
-Erika- |
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Re: ''addiction''
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:08:39 AM AEST
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| Wow. I love the last line..."I love you. I hate you. I'm gone." Very powerful. Good job! You have caught the pain of a suicidal person well in this piece. |
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