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Not There
Contributed by
rhea
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:55:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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For the first time in my life...
I cannot speak,
I have never felt so much pain....
upon my cheek.
Never before
have I felt such a hit,
and everything gets worse
after every slit.
You think that after a while
I would finally learn,
then he turned around with his fist clenched
and I knew it was my turn.
What kind of person
has this kind of heart,
He does not understand that he has
torn my whole world apart.
But then again why would he care...
It is as if he wasn't even there.
Copyright ©
rhea
... [
2004-12-28 23:55:56]
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Re: Not There
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:58:46 PM AEST
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| Wow...this is such an emotional and sad write. It's great though...Nice job. |
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Re: Not There
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:12:15 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful and heartbreaking...i can relate somewhat. good job |
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Re: Not There
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:29:11 AM AEST
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Well this is a great masterpeice. It really makes one think.
Gret job.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Not There
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:31:53 AM AEST
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| I am in awe, this is a fantasic pice. |
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Re: Not There
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 06:59:04 AM AEST
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dark and emotional, a great combination for a great write
pixie xx |
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