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sinner
Contributed by
rhea
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:49:16 PM in AEST
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I'm outside of myself, looking directly in,
looking in my eyes, feeling my own skin.
I am perfect on the outside,
exactly what He desires.
but on the inside I'm cold as ice,
and my sins could ignite 100 fires.
Why did He go through so much, just to get
looked over?
Giving Him ignorance and then the cold shoulder.
Everynow and then, you'll go to church
and you'll pray,
but He wants you to be a conformist to Him,
not some unknown stray.
I'm holding my own hand,
wiping away my tears.
Telling myself that atleast Christ loves me,
then why do I still have fears?
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Re: sinner
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:54:36 PM AEST
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wow, this was great! as a christian i can reltate to ur fears...sometimes we think God could never accept us beacause of all our sins....i think its called insecurity. this was an orginial write and i loved it!
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Re: sinner
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:06:26 AM AEST
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Great write.
God doesn't give us things in life that we can't handle. Nice job. |
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Re: sinner
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:39:11 AM AEST
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| Good write but me myself i dont go to church i believe thats all that counts |
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Re: sinner
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:25:00 AM AEST
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We're only human and are over comers by faith, luv, mercy, grace-n-undying luv.
I don't do church either but definently know I'm jesus kid and a sinner.
Very thought provoking write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: sinner
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:15:04 AM AEST
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| A good poem. We are all sinners,but as long as the struggle is there, we are making progress. |
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