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In and out of Despair
Contributed by
hoidy
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:38:33 PM in AEST
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I look into the dark depths of despair,
Struggling through the emotions that I feel,
Looking for a hope that appears not there,
Rolling faster, though as if on a wheel,
What sends me spiraling down these steep steps?
Tbere is no chance to rest or unwind,
I remember not the last time I slept.
Consistantly I am held in this bind.
At the end of this tunnel hope arrives,
And to her beauty no one can compare.
She appears as that for which I must strive.
Due to her, I once again leave despair.
In the end she emerges as the cause,
And the one who I give a loving pause.
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hoidy
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2004-12-28 23:38:33]
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Re: In and out of Despair
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:42:40 PM AEST
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wow, this is beautiful....a great poem about never giving up hope....i love the ur word usage and imagery, love it
"At the end of this tunnel hope arrives,
And to her beauty no one can compare.
She appears as that for which I must strive."thats beautiful....leaves with a sense of hope. thanku |
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Re: In and out of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:43:31 PM AEST
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| This is a great sonnet. I like it a lot! awesome write! |
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Re: In and out of Despair
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:31:32 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
Remakably sweet.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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