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*ComE bAcK tO Me*
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:26:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Come back to me,
the sky is grey,
my heart is bleeding for you,
and im stuck in disarray.
The bitterness
of the night,
makes me choke inside,
as i see your soul take flight.
im helpless,
just watching you fly away,
take me with you,
stop my sky from being grey.
i would take you back,
forgive your ways,
holding you forever,
as out song of love plays.
i want you to know,
i treasure you,
that smile and the way you walk,
everything you do.
i never got the chance,
to prove my love was true,
so believe me now,
when i say i love you,
to have one more
night with you,
is my fondest prayer to God,
your kiss made new.
it saddens me to know,
you bid her farewell,
she receives your kiss,
in your arms she dwells.
"Goodbye" i say
even though you cant hear,
you've gone away,
no reply is what i fear.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2004-12-28 23:26:42]
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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me*
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:30:23 PM AEST
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Amazing. I love the flow.
Great job. |
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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me*
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:35:53 PM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull masterpeice.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me*
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:15:06 AM AEST
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| wow... amazing poetry |
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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me*
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:30:54 PM AEST
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cool poem
i love the way you portrayed the emotions |
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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me*
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:26:00 PM AEST
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Great poem... really liked it... and... as u know from my poem... i can totally relate...
again... great write...
Jishes |
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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me*
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:00:22 AM AEST
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| I love your poem, i can relate to it |
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Re: *ComE bAcK tO Me*
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:29:39 PM AEST
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I felt every word..
what an awesome write Rach..
I love the flow in this best!
a most amazing poetress you are-
5 stars on this.. ; )
I loved it!
B
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