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Time
Contributed by
sweetdreamsaremadeofthis
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:10:32 PM in AEST
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Time spirals forward
Like Fall clinging to Summer
As I cling to you
Like sand in my palms
It shall slip through my fingers
Time is relentless
Clinging desperately
To things fated to whither
Soon I, too, shall fade
Hope will depart us
All within a lulluby
Leaving us dreaming
So now you may ask,
'What, in life, is eternal?'
Love is the answer
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Re: Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:35:51 PM AEST
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| Great write. It's really beautiful. |
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Re: Time
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:46:00 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem, it was powerful. well done!!!!! |
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Re: Time
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 06:35:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Spazzo |
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Re: Time
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:31:46 PM AEST
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Wonderful piece, it's so well put together
i've not seen this style as often as i do free verse, so
it's definitely refreshing.
keep up the excellent writing! |
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