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I survived
Contributed by
miss_erika
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:07:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I survived
the depression
all of the fear
every bit of hurt
and the feeling of being alone.
I survived
the addiction
all of the obsession
every bit of need
and the feeling of always wanting more.
I survived
the ware between my parents
all of the hate
every bit of heartbreak
and the feeling of guilt.
I survived
the rumors
all of the drama
every bit of horror
and the feeling of having everything to lose.
From going through all of that
I finally have the strength to say
I survived.
Copyright ©
miss_erika
... [
2004-12-28 23:07:07]
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Re: I survived
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:22:24 PM AEST
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This is a very powerfull, uplifting, masterpeice of inner beauty.
Don't know how old u r but it shows much wisdom.
Be proud of yourself and this a mazing write.
Huggs, smiles,
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Re: I survived
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by bluebird on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:28:14 PM AEST
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this was awesome coulda been beta.but still good.
~keep the faith~
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Re: I survived
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:40:36 PM AEST
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This is great write!
It's very inspiring and it's great to know you're able to look back on it all and realize that you're a stronger and wiser person because of all of it.
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Re: I survived
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:38:24 AM AEST
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It could use a little flow but none the less its a good poem, writen with so much wisdom to it. Keep writing.
Hugs,
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Re: I survived
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by english-pea-pelter on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:01:38 PM AEST
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great work! you sure did come out good from those hard times! keep high hopes on your poetry.. this poem is the least sucky poem i have read yet! and ive read alot!
peace out ^_^V
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