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the uneven land
Contributed by
colette
on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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in the tenth century
a moorish man
against the red hills of marrakesh
enters the garden
like a moon
bends down and
takes her hand
kisses it
slowly
never moving his eyes
from hers
here
on the ocean
in the fall
the shadows stretch long down the sidewalks
gold light
blur of umber and sienna your
chalk blue eyes
making a
seafarer of me
in my boat of solitude
i rest
my oars
and will know when
you lift yourself
from sitting
and take my hand
onto your
mouth.
Copyright ©
colette
... [
2002-12-01 11:00:00]
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Re: the uneven land
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 02:36:50 PM AEST
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| This is one of the most beautiful poems about the 'waiting' I have ever read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. |
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Re: the uneven land
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by OreO on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 03:56:06 PM AEST
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Absolutely breathtaking...
i enjoyed this one alot. Thanks
for sharing it. Keep em 'coming
.::��`�..� OreO�..���`::.
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Re: the uneven land
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by colette on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 05:34:39 PM AEST
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thank you. i appreciate the encouragement.
colette |
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Re: the uneven land
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 06:17:47 PM AEST
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| This is your most stunning piece - imbued with such incredible sensuousness and passionate sadness. |
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Re: the uneven land
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by AJG on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 01:08:08 AM AEST
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These words took me to places , times and feelings instantly and overwhelmingly. Your gift for describing intimacy almost exceeds comprehnsion. Love. Wanting love. Feeling love. Seeing Love. Imagining Love. We're all in the same vessel of solitude together. For better or for Iceberg.
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