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TSUNAMI
Contributed by
KOZMICSPIRID
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 07:19:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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What are your cozmic roots
have you given them a chance
or are you bewildered in humanities trance.
What's your priority
money a job
hoow much do you contribute to the dark smog.
Are you religious
do you act as you preach
do you respect the creation.
How did you respond to the ancient vibration
a divine frequency channeling information
pyramids represent a sacred constilation.
Earth awakaning
brigs forth true devistation
especially for the poorer unfortunate nations.
Copyright ©
KOZMICSPIRID
... [
2004-12-28 19:19:17]
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Re: TSUNAMI
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by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:05:33 PM AEST
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| Whoa-i loved it. |
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Re: TSUNAMI
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:38:48 PM AEST
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| the wording was great but I do think puntuation might clarify things a bit.. |
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Re: TSUNAMI
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:01:46 PM AEST
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| amazing poem. loved it. i love how you wrote it and the diction. |
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