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Lonely View
Contributed by
luinil
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 06:32:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Morning’s a lonely view
Day breaks my will and steals what’s left of you
I can see clearly now
Trapped in your shadow where I can’t get out
This path goes on for years
Every step closer; watch me disappear
Hate pulses through my eyes
Rain weighs me down and drowns a bleeding sky
Thought I lost you last night
I hate the need that chains you to my side
Why fight to stay alive
Too weak and jaded now to survive
Bound to the one I loathe
I walk alone on this burning road.
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luinil
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2004-12-28 18:32:57]
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Re: Lonely View
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by Gimpie on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:43:00 PM AEST
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| very awesome! love it...good write/ |
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Re: Lonely View
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:26:44 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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