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Black Honey (my poetry)
Contributed by
the_Ghost_Moth
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:32:47 PM in AEST
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The black honey
bleeding out of
the broken paperbacks of
comic book graffiti
for a paper heart
chased by ink rain
that chokes like bullets
the bitterness of my
dreams
defeated
the sweetness of my
dreams
expressed
to someone who believes
my poetry
--by Ghost Moth
Copyright ©
the_Ghost_Moth
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:37:49 PM AEST
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Really cool peom! But... (whispers) bitterness has two "t"s.
Cheers!
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:48:53 PM AEST
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* eyes TB's post *
* clears throat *
Uhm, Jules ... ? Nevermind.
Gee Em !!! Great to see a write from you. And a fabulously presented one at that. You rock, Dude !!!
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:52:41 PM AEST
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| hey is that you? kewl dude! LOL.. granny here.. timebot already told you so I won't bother.. If that's you I could do some cradle robbin..how do you spell cradle..well anyway..you're pretty darned cute dude...rotfl.. |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:56:30 PM AEST
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UNFORTUNATELY, I can't edit comments, darn it!
*Grumbles* Teach me to comment on spelling and not preview. phooey!
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:50:31 AM AEST
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Now there's an entrance (or... um... re-entrance as it were)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
*succumbs to fit of inspiration - stops in the middle of the comment - writes - returns*
I like this, G. The concept, the piece (I mean the poem!)- all of it. Excellent work!
Wondering where we'd be without those like you,
Snemmy |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:18:15 AM AEST
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Interesting concept, Ghost.
I will be reading. |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 07:03:09 AM AEST
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wonderful to have you back hun *hugs* missed ya!!!
love pix xx |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:19:42 AM AEST
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Oooh, I like this, though I don't pretend to understand any of it.
Hmmm, and I can't say I even have a fave stanza, because I really like it all, and everytime I try to say a bit I like most I like another bit. lol.
Anyway, great write, glad to have ya back.
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:52:17 PM AEST
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To actually have someone truly feel what we felt when we put the ideas to paper.....thats the ultimate victory for a poet.
I probably missed your entire point here but it sounded great huh?
Barkeep!!!
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:46:08 PM AEST
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No, you got the point...
hopefully they will believe what
I'm trying to say
and in its artistic value as well.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 04:39:49 PM AEST
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Ghosty, you rule...seriously you are king...My hat is tipped to you and your excellent poetry
Mason |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:45:47 PM AEST
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the bitterness of my
dreams
defeated
the sweetness of my
dreams
expressed
lovely - just terrific expression.
You're too much - Ghosty...Mothy...
Dreamy. |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:44:00 PM AEST
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Loved the first stanza:
"The black honey
bleeding out of
the broken paperbacks of
comic book graffiti"
That was great, a perfect opening to this
poem and the significance of it. |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:34:59 PM AEST
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ahhh... there you are like a breath of fresh air... this is excellent mothy:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 08:57:34 PM AEST
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| gorgeous |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:17:14 PM AEST
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I Love usage of words! Always!
XOXOXJill |
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Re: Black Honey (my poetry)
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 11:06:32 AM AEST
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Amazing.. This was brillant. Short but full of meaning.. Loved this..
Take care
christina |
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