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Punch Clock
Contributed by
namesaretaken
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:33:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Through life
Rules read
Till death
Options dead
Another piece in the tool shed
A
Machines cogs
Computer logs
Emotionless scene
Nightmarish dream
Never hear
A silent mutter
Out of the
Cookie cutter
Becoming
Autonomous drones
Expendable clones
Another robot
To fill the time slot
A prison
A dead bolt to lock
That keeps you inside
Punch clock
Copyright ©
namesaretaken
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2004-12-28 16:33:31]
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Re: Punch Clock
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by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:59:48 PM AEST
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| Intersting style here - it punctuates the message in it being mechanical, succinct - relays the tone of a hum-drum, routine life. |
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Re: Punch Clock
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:49:33 AM AEST
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Ah yes, NAT - what torture it is for a poet, eh?
Destroy the mold, bust that lock -
Rage, rage - against the clock! Lol!
I enjoyed this (even though you probably couldn't tell per my silly mood and apparent ability to get all sorts of carried away in your comment section!)
~SNM~
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