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silent tears
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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from out of the darkest nightmare that I own
life has presented a brand new let-down
"only a few stitches" the doctor let it be known
a child's blood quietly drips to the ground
it couldn't be sadness that yields to the knife
for misery's face never has been shared
only comfort and fulfilment gilded this life
still, there's damage as if no one cared
claim's of every wound causes some feeling
each new slice into flesh cuts into my heart
tell me child what it is that leaves me reeling
let someone in, PLEASE... I'm afraid we'll part
what storm is there, hidden 'neath the smile's shine
does fear hold some deep dark that makes you so numb
give up your pain, your sorrow that you can't define
tell me dear, before, to that urge again, you succumb
I only have love within this outstretched hand
please take and use it instead of that onerous tool
against whatever secret agony, it'll help you stand
so that never again should your essence pool
Copyright ©
reprobate
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2004-12-28 15:27:20]
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Re: silent tears
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:54:16 PM AEST
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| this poem is very good, but yet very emotional!! keep writing, great details!!~~poetrygirl1991 |
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Re: silent tears
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:21:54 PM AEST
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| I feel you pleading..and want to join you.. |
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Re: silent tears
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 01:48:16 AM AEST
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| well this certainly killed my good mood. very well written. maybe some day things will be different, but sometimes things cant change and its the best for that direction. |
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