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THE SEA.
Contributed by
Ravensfire
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:14:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sea, in all her majestic beauty, To sail upon her is my sound duty. The sound of her waves crashing on the shore, I hear her cries more and more. The uncanny glow of the stars on her waves, The darkness of her depths reminds me of deep caves. Her movements can be gentle they can be violent, To find her dangers they are just a hint. Her ripples her colors are not what they seem, She can take a life with just a gleam. She gives up her treasures with a lot of fuss, Because you see her laws are just.
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Re: THE SEA.
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:01:21 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i cant say that i really like the sea all that much. but i can also say that i havent been near it that much either. =] i wish i used punctuation in my poems ::sigh:: |
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Re: THE SEA.
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by Solnubis on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:57:34 AM AEST
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| Your poems seem to be based around water which is a great omen. I wish to read more of your poetry in the future. I can really feel them, almost like a sense of being right there. |
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Re: THE SEA.
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:19:03 PM AEST
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| beauiful nature write. much peace. Laura |
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Re: THE SEA.
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:20:52 PM AEST
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| OOPS Beautiful write.(left out my "t"). |
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