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THANX FOR THE PAIN YOU DUCK
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:57:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i was thinking after you said what you said,
that i would be better off if I were dead,
then your memeory wouldn't be in my head,
i'd be safe from loving you, safe from my tears,
i wouldn't be reminded of all the years you threw away,
and wouldn't want to reach for you now,
but then i thought of all the things in my life that matter,
and yes it was my heart that is you just had to shatter,
but i saw that the person in this who was wrong,
was never once me, always you
We lost our love, we lost our trust,
i hope she's worth the heart you've turned to dust,
there is nothing left for me to love you with
all is left is me and my pain,
so as my tears fall like rain,
i hate your for what you've done to me,
i hate myself for needing you so bad,
i hate all the love we once had,
but most of all i hate you
for not being the man
i knew you were,
now when your holding her
i cruse you with my memory
and may it haunt you
untill you feel the pain that I do
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brokenwings
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2004-12-28 14:57:21]
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Re: THANX FOR THE PAIN YOU DUCK
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by beautiful_loser on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 05:41:27 AM AEST
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| loved the poem! it explains a lot of my feelings of my ex and what he did to me...thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: THANX FOR THE PAIN YOU DUCK
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by Buzz on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 01:20:20 PM AEST
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Wow.
Amazing.
I really like this poem.
I can feel the pain and anger here.
Partly b/c I understand what is like.
I wish you the best of luck and hope you can move on to find the one that is right for you. |
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