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Dimensional Breakdown
Contributed by
darkkai
on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 08:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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At night i am reminded of a past too clear.
familiar faces i hold dear.
anger sets in and the walls fall out,
desperation and darkness disqualify
my hopes for joy.
this black heart of mine grows
from a seed in my avatar.
the unstoppable hatred grows
from a single image of a man
i once knew. now i fall out of dreamscape
and realize the nightmare begin.
Copyright ©
darkkai
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2002-12-01 08:40:00]
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Re: Dimensional Breakdown
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 03:46:21 PM AEST
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A single image of a man i
once knew...now you fall out of
dreamscape and realize the
nightmare begin...ah i love
that part of this poem. Thanks
for sharing it, it's beautifully
written and very sad..
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Dimensional Breakdown
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:10:46 PM AEST
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| U write with such emotion in ur poems.Dats how the best of poets do it.Great Job. |
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