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If We Both
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:32:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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if we both would have worked things through
it could have been you and me watching spider man 2
but i guess we just couldn't i guess things were to hard
i wanna let you know i was never scared
if we both would have just talked things through to eachother
to this day we would have still been together
i must admit things with you were greater
now that i'm all alone things are harder
if we both would have put in any effort at all
we would have never had to watch eachother fall
and i wouldnt be sitting here waiting for you to call
and we would both be standing taller then tall
if we both would have just worked things through
it wouldnt be hard to talk to you
and we'd both know what to do
it could have been just you and me,andrew
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Re: If We Both
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by Specman on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:38:20 AM AEST
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| Andrew: CALL THE FREAKING GIRL!!!!!! Why do we have to be subject to your poor decisions and lack of attention to some old flame. If you ever post something like this again consider me no longer your best friend!!!!!! |
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Re: If We Both
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by Kitty_cat on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:59:44 AM AEST
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don't listen to that specman d***. your rhyming scheme was very difficult but you did well considering. keep writing.
cat xx |
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Re: If We Both
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by prozac_memory on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:30:10 AM AEST
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i really like this poem. keep up the good writing.
.x. |
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Re: If We Both
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 05:29:32 PM AEST
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| good write he must've hurt ya bad gunna hafta tell me bout it if u feel u can |
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