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A new definition of ''Unwanted''
Contributed by
the_escort
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:26:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Yesterday, I felt happy and alive.
I felt like I've been again revived.
My thick walls of steel around me
Have melted from my eyes that can see.
I knew that I wasn't alone.
Then a pure me was mistaken again.
Abandonned discretely in the rain.
From walls of steel to walls of fire
forced to spurn an essential desire.
Alone.
I wanna it to be like in the past
Where I was ugly and I wasn't last
In the closed and open hearts around me.
I really felt the things that I needed to see.
At least, I wasn't alone.
Life has used me like a demonstration
To enrichen others and numb my frustration.
Consealing all of my dreams and desires
That are too me, clear and required.
I'll even name some.
Shopping down town, Playing video games together, Sharing my opinion about others, Jokes,
Talking about my job, Helping each other, And sharing each others happy and dark secrets.
My fate was In your hands.
I don't care if one person abandonnes me
But not EVERYONE if I'm being MYSELF.
Now I guess I'm...
too positive to be valued by a negative person.
too negative to ve valued by a positive person.
I'm just alone and useless.
Just like all my uncared about poems.
Till next time...who am I kidding?
Copyright ©
the_escort
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2004-12-28 10:26:12]
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Re: A new definition of ''Unwanted''
(User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 01:05:22 AM AEST
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This is verry compelling writting, such honesty and
so touching, u think no one cares? think again, i'm
reading it, u keep being your real self, and 2 hell
with those who can't handle it . . .
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Re: A new definition of ''Unwanted''
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by Eterno_Vittima on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:07:44 PM AEST
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| wow, no one can relate to it? think again, that was a beautiful write, keep it up, and stay true to who you truly are, |
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