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recipe for a bad relationship
Contributed by
row
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:17:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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break it in two
grow them apart
then place them together
and see what they do
stir slowly
then heat
when they begin to boil
let them sit
meanwhile prepare the conflict
and mix with jealousy
bake till rotten
then add rivalry
sprinkle in ignorance
and top with anger
serve with lots of guilt
to a lost stranger
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row
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2004-12-28 05:17:25]
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Re: recipe for a bad relationship
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:42:36 PM AEST
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| very good write... touched me... because i just left a situation like that... don't know yet if i'll survive |
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Re: recipe for a bad relationship
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by Stej on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:51:22 PM AEST
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this is a really cute poem that's about something pretty deep ...describing the relationship like a recipe was a great idea- nice work
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Re: recipe for a bad relationship
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:22:28 PM AEST
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every poem u write is better and better. i guess lots
of ur artistic nature has pasted on into ur poems as
well. anywayz nice write here,
diz |
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