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Innocence
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:44:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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(because)
He talked to the moon all night
And (someday,
He wanted to be just like her)
You didn't need words
'Cause she always understands
(because)
He thanked the grass
Laying down beside them
(the grass is always smiling between your toes)
Tickling them back with his fingers
(because)
He was hugging the breeze
(who just loved to say hi)
The wind always hugged back
He didn't have a watch
(So he never ran out of time)
(Because)
The night fell
Softer than velvet
He loved to sleep under the stars--
~"And he saw everything, (because) he saw nothing.
(And that was everything.) "
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EternitysLyre
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2004-12-28 04:44:51]
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Re: Innocence
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by Row on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:44:44 AM AEST
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| this is real nice poem, something nice to read. A there's some really well thought out lines here that have beautiful meanings. Good work |
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Re: Innocence
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by girish on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 06:20:02 AM AEST
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very nice poem to read with. i have never tried a sort of this. thanks for sharing
girish |
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Re: Innocence
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:07:17 AM AEST
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| nice poem!! keep up on writing~~thanks again~~chrissy be sure to read my poem"everytime" |
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