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The Ultimate Game
Contributed by
crash
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Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:38:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Good days, bad days
to me all the same
Living our lives
all we do is play a game
But in the end
we all lose
players and rules
none may we choose
In the end what have we done
Are we the remembered
or the forgotten
Either way
the time lost has rotten
We see it in the news
every day
that another is dead
and on their way
but has their life ended?
or is it just game over?
Copyright ©
crash
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2004-12-28 04:38:11]
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Re: The Ultimate Game
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by Row on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:47:20 AM AEST
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| well it's another way of looking at things isnt it |
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Re: The Ultimate Game
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by girish on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 06:22:21 AM AEST
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a nice portrayal of the reality. worth to think over
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Re: The Ultimate Game
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:23:38 PM AEST
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A totally different way to look at it. I like the way it is written, not in any standard form, but still quite true and to the point.
Better dayz
~Jace~ |
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