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Our Split Picture
Contributed by
crash
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:27:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I smoke again
when I cannot sleep
Off my mind
you, I cannot keep
We had it good
but then we splt
Since that day
my life's been sh!t
I can't believe my life
How much you influenced me
I can't believe how it happened
Why'd you flee?
We had a few problems
like everyone I've known
But it was nothing like that
Thanks to Tommy I'm alone
Not for long though
I can't take it anymore
I'm about to end my life
so I can't hurt anymore
They'll find me in the morning
with our picture on my heart
The blade stuck through
finally tearing us apart
They will say I died
becuase I missed her
The only proof to this
will be Our Split Picture
Copyright ©
crash
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2004-12-28 02:27:57]
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Re: Our Split Picture
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:32:33 AM AEST
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| Wow...this is just great. Awesome poem. |
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Re: Our Split Picture
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:16:39 AM AEST
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Well certainly pray this is jus writing.
Very sad but u convinced me.
Hang tuff!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Our Split Picture
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:35:12 AM AEST
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Relationships are always ups and downs and splits, but life goes on, you will find someone oneday who will love you always...keep on living better than throwing it all away and dying over one person.
Cool writer full of depth and feeling. |
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Re: Our Split Picture
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by Crash on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 08:09:13 PM AEST
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| This poem is soo sad, it had me in tears as i wrote it. It cam from the heart, which in the end was utterly destroyed, but hapier times await those who pull through, so I am on my way |
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Re: Our Split Picture
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:29:22 PM AEST
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This is a totally new outlook on forms of suicide over an ex. I never even thought of the way you described your self-induced death, But on the other hand at the same time you wrote a seriously emotional and very well described scenic poem. good job.
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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